In shāqatka, the verb “awakened longing” is followed by the feminine marker and second-person object suffix. Its subject is ẓuʿn al-ḥayy: the departing caravan itself stirs feeling. Ḥīna taḥammalū sets the time, while fa-takannasū depicts the travellers gathering into their covered conveyances.
The imagery is not merely visual: the imperfect verb taṣirru evokes the continuing audible creak. This shift from completed actions to a present-tense sound makes the remembered scene immediate.