SubjectComparison imageShared feature
abandoned campsitefading tattooa lingering faint mark
camel-litterslarge shipsweight and swaying movement
ship parting waterhand dividing soilcutting a path through material
smilewhite flowersbrightness and freshness
radiant facesun’s cloaklight spreading over a surface
Each simile is more than decorative language: it makes a particular observation visible. This gives the opening a degree of artistic unity despite its changes of scene.