LessonsTranslation and Close Reading — Selected Passages from Ten MaqāmātQuiz

«لَقَدِ اسْتَسْمَنْتَ يَا هَذَا ذَا وَرَمٍ»
You mistook a swollen man for someone robust and well nourished.

Istasmanta concerns judging someone fat or substantial; dhā waram corrects that judgment by revealing swelling. The point is not a medical diagnosis. It is a deliberately sharp comparison between deceptive outward impressiveness and genuine merit.

A flat rendering (“you saw a fat man”) loses the mistake. The verbs “mistook” or “took for” communicate the evaluative error. The critique remains abrasive; translating it as gentle approval would reverse its force.

Translation exercise
Omit “mistook” from the translation. Does the criticism of faulty judgment survive?

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Mistaking swelling for substance: the critical idiom

Translation and Close Reading — Selected Passages from Ten Maqāmāt

«لَقَدِ اسْتَسْمَنْتَ يَا هَذَا ذَا وَرَمٍ»
You mistook a swollen man for someone robust and well nourished.

Istasmanta concerns judging someone fat or substantial; dhā waram corrects that judgment by revealing swelling. The point is not a medical diagnosis. It is a deliberately sharp comparison between deceptive outward impressiveness and genuine merit.

A flat rendering (“you saw a fat man”) loses the mistake. The verbs “mistook” or “took for” communicate the evaluative error. The critique remains abrasive; translating it as gentle approval would reverse its force.

Translation exercise
Omit “mistook” from the translation. Does the criticism of faulty judgment survive?