LessonsTranslation and Close Reading — Selected Passages from Ten MaqāmātQuiz

«حَتَّى لَاحُوا كَأَسْنَانِ الْمُشْطِ فِي الِاسْتِوَاءِ»
Until they appeared as equal as the teeth of a comb.

The comb image is conspicuous, but fī al-istiwāʾ expressly names the shared property: equality or evenness. Translating as though the travelers physically acquired the shape of teeth would mistake the vehicle for the whole meaning.

The passage pictures a cohesive traveling company. Including “in equality” or “as equal as” makes the intended comparison legible. A translator should recover the specific point of resemblance, not import every property of the image.

Translation exercise
Remove “in equality” and identify the unintended comparisons that become possible.

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Teeth of a comb: identifying the relevant likeness

Translation and Close Reading — Selected Passages from Ten Maqāmāt

«حَتَّى لَاحُوا كَأَسْنَانِ الْمُشْطِ فِي الِاسْتِوَاءِ»
Until they appeared as equal as the teeth of a comb.

The comb image is conspicuous, but fī al-istiwāʾ expressly names the shared property: equality or evenness. Translating as though the travelers physically acquired the shape of teeth would mistake the vehicle for the whole meaning.

The passage pictures a cohesive traveling company. Including “in equality” or “as equal as” makes the intended comparison legible. A translator should recover the specific point of resemblance, not import every property of the image.

Translation exercise
Remove “in equality” and identify the unintended comparisons that become possible.