كَرِيمٌ مَتَى أَمْدَحْهُ أَمْدَحْهُ وَالْوَرَى مَعِي
He is generous: when I praise him, others praise him with me.
The consecutive amdahuhu amdahuhu illustrates how immediate recurrence of the same sound sequence may produce burdensome repetition. The sense is clear, yet the phrasing can feel heavy in recitation.
Repetition is not intrinsically a defect: it may establish emphasis or artistic rhythm. The diagnosis here concerns the excessive phonetic burden of this particular combination.
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Fasaha of Discourse: Weak Composition, Word Disharmony and Obscurity
كَرِيمٌ مَتَى أَمْدَحْهُ أَمْدَحْهُ وَالْوَرَى مَعِي
He is generous: when I praise him, others praise him with me.
The consecutive amdahuhu amdahuhu illustrates how immediate recurrence of the same sound sequence may produce burdensome repetition. The sense is clear, yet the phrasing can feel heavy in recitation.
Repetition is not intrinsically a defect: it may establish emphasis or artistic rhythm. The diagnosis here concerns the excessive phonetic burden of this particular combination.