BashshārSallāmEffect
lam yaẓfar bi-ḥājatihimāta ghammanFrom unmet aim to intense grief
bi-l-ṭayyibātbi-l-ladhdhahMore direct naming of enjoyment
al-fātik al-lahijal-jasūrCondensed characterization of boldness
The shared thought is distinct from its revised verbal structure. Sallām is praised as better composed and more concise, not simply because he came later.
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Ighārah and Maskh: Recasting Verse, Eloquence and Literary Appraisal
BashshārSallāmEffect
lam yaẓfar bi-ḥājatihimāta ghammanFrom unmet aim to intense grief
bi-l-ṭayyibātbi-l-ladhdhahMore direct naming of enjoyment
al-fātik al-lahijal-jasūrCondensed characterization of boldness
The shared thought is distinct from its revised verbal structure. Sallām is praised as better composed and more concise, not simply because he came later.